I really liked this one.idk why but it was really really really really good.i loved it

Wow this reminds me of me and josh that night at the carnival. ha but it really does. this is one of my favorites i think. 5/5

I really like the way you put your words it just really makes me want to read the poem over and over again...great poem keep it up

You have a gift, a gift to make everything flow so perfectly.
This was awesome, so sweet, so sad and just perfect.
How can i give you anything less than a 10? But i guess a 5 will have to do
love Tara-Kay
x

Omgosh this poem is perfects. the words just go. and i can really relate it to myself. great poem

I'm sure my gf would like to read this poem :P lol Its a good write... The flow was good, the word choice was decent, and the concept was great! 5/5

Ah, a poem about giving into temptation: I love it. I like the confusion portrayed here. The narrator has no idea what the "right" thing is to do, whether they should give in to their desires, or stay strong to their beliefs and hold back.

"When we kiss,
I get lost in your lips.
I get lost even more,
When you grab my hips."

^^ For some reason I really liked this stanza, along with the closing one.

Nicely done.