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by Jackiee   Jul 22, 2007


When I'm alone
I feel broken, cold,
and as if no one cares
or did care
camouflaged so no one
can see these tears i cry
as if I'm hidden beneath
walls in the darkness
of my own shadows
surrounded by nothing
except the cold hard
ground in the middle
of no where, never to
be heard from again
where i lay and waiting
for when i finally
close my eyes and start
to fade until i slowly
and completely
disappear

eh i don't know what you think....it was kind of a quick write...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Travis

    I think thats cool. its sort of how i feel

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Quickies are some of the best writes.