I really liked the fact that you rhymed the last two lines of the stanzas. It made the poem different and more interesting. Powerful words, an emotive write.

Take Care:)

Oh, wow. Exact feelings I feel.
This is the poem I connected with most so far.
The depth and emotions were amazing.
I liked the ending, it wrapped everything up.
You have a wonderful mindset for poetry.
Good job with this one, darling.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

Powerful words, darlin'
Keep 'em coming

Wow.
I absolutely love it.
Especially the ending.
Wozers.
You're really good. :/
I'm not quite sure what to say though. :/
but, I love it. and it has great meaning to it.
keep it up dear.

Yeah =] I liked this one too. It had a good flow, and a strong message. =) And the first stanza really catches you =]
5/5 again
xxx

I LIKE THAT POEM HOW LONG YOU BEEN WRITIN' I THINK THIS 1 IS THA BETTER OF THA THREE

It has a good rhyme i really liked it.
the ending was great!

I think this is the best one I have read of yours so far. I liked the rhyme of the last two lines it was really effective and made the rhyme stand out. Quite an interesting read with an effective last stanza. A good effort when writing this poem. Keep it up. ~mel

Nicely written...i love the rhyme sceme...its very interesting .... again 5/5

Okay, I LOVED the ending. It was hard hitting and intense.

The emotion and depth you put into this piece are easily felt by the reader, and the imagery was beautifully created.

Flow was great throughout, and I found this to be both orignial and unique in concept.