Good one

Wow that was a 4.5 to me so that rounds up to a 5 lol but loved the beging especially first stanza maybe u can read one of mine.

Wow! This is an impressive poem! I love how you kept a great flow and the rhyming was perfect ^.^
The first stanza:

A thousand tears I've shed,
Ten thousand more un-said
There is not any feeling,
All my wounds need healing

Really caught my attention. "Ten thousand more un-said" had so much meaning and emotion in it. This poem really drew me in, so keep it up, and 5/5

With all do respect,
Hatori

P.S. If you get a chance, could you please RRC one of my poems?
Thanks!

I love the way that you put your real feelings and emotions into it

I like it.
Two thumbs up.
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