Comments : Lies&Broken Treason

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Your face in my dreams isn't what I want to see

    that line was absolutely beautiful
    very good poem
    5/5
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    The first line is really catchy, it really makes you want to read the rest =] And as you read on, there is a nice flow and rhyme in it, and it's full of emotion. Well that why this poem deserves a 5/5 Yay (>'')><(''<)