I liked the simplicity of this poem. Very down-to-earth free-sprited kind of thing. For me, it portrays the freedom that most of us long for.

Very interesting poem. Topic is excellent and you wrote this piece superbly. Message of this poem is great. Every stanza is beautifully written and this piece is very original.
Well done, this poem truly deserves 5/5

Willow this poem as cute and midly romantic. OI guess to me it was te imagery that gave it a rimance glow!!

Ahhh I just fell in love with this poem. It's so... free.

I really like the feel of this poem, i really dig it. 5/5

This is soooooo cute...

Oh, and well written...

This is sooo cute!

Nice words..^^

This is very cute! I love your way with words.
Keep it up!