My emotions; Seen blind.

by DeathlyAmore   Jul 24, 2007


I believe utterly; If I wait.
Maybe she will see.
My emotions I feel toward; This angel.
She might see one day; Hopefully.

Wanting to tell her; "I like you"
Simple words yet so agonizing; To.
Release them to your ears; So that,
Perhaps I may one day; [A wish]; Declare you.

Declare you.

Simple words turned so hard, complex.
Turned to desolating, And this to me.
Is harmful inside, Piling up to eventually; Explode.
Again; I pray maybe... maybe... you will see...

I make it so Obvious; So easy.

Blind beloved; My blind fool.
How I wish to have nerves of steel so I may;
Tell you everything inside toward you.
And share with you what I feel... Everyday!

Oh blinded beloved...

But I still...

Believe utterly that; If I wait...
Maybe... maybe she will see;
My emotions I feel toward; This angel...
She might see one day; Hopefully...
Hopefully...
Hopefully...

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Plot, Thesis, Main Idea:

"Believing if I wait long enough,
Maybe you will see that I have feelings toward you.
Yet because you are blind [Emotionally].
You cannot see... what I feel for you so strongly"
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To your consideration,
Samuel.

"I shall always and forever be..."
[Deathly'Amore]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hm...
    I'm an idiot, aren't I?

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    If I said I wasn't curious about who this is about, then I'd be lying. && I don't want to lie. :P

    "I believe utterly; If I wait.
    Maybe she will see.
    My emotions I feel toward; This angel.
    She might see one day; Hopefully."

    ^ An -angel-, huh? Hmm.... She must be an amazing girl. Lovely job, as always. 5.5 :P

    - Stephyy <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Thats beautiful, but i dont think it needed the explanation at the end. if someone couldnt understand what it was saying then they are not worthy enough to be reading such beauty. 5/5 <3