Oh what is it with me and sad things it's like they're attracted to me lol :P

but beyond my random blabber. and other than the fact it made cry. I thought it was really good. I can imagine you on a guitar and belchin to it. lol and the words...the words, the words. I'm so jeal! haha I'm just sitting going, "Why didn't I think of that!" =] kudos kayla!!!

Wow. I. Love. This. Poem.! IT IS SO FRIGGIN AWESOME! It's so meaningful and beautiful! WOW!

Okay.. let me just say that i absolutely loved this poem.
I loved how you took the time to make every two words rhyme.
It was log, but not so long it bored me..
y'know?
but anyways.
it was really good.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey

Excellent poem. I could feel the pain, the sadness, the despair. I'm sorry about what happened, but great job.
--Jack

This poem made me cry. This is so full of passion and you can tell it came from the heart. Keep up the good work!!!!! I know I would feel this way if my boyfriend broke up with me!

Even if I'm sick of you,
I can't get you out of my view.
You're everywhere I go,
It's like you're all that I know.

these are my fav lines...i really like this poem, some of the rhyming seems abit forced but all in all a great poem. 5/5

Its amazing..really...so much feelings

This was a truly amazing poem congrats. it was so full of emotion! great job :)

I really like this poem.You could tell you put your heart into it.This really touches the heart.Your a really good poet. :)

Wow pretty powerful one :) I like it. It's deep.
But I hate the end.. I hate when it ends with death. it should end with the girl finding someone else and making the lonesome guy jelous :P lol I dunno.
Anyways nice write 5/5

Wow, great poem, great emotion, great everything, i love it!

Aww, saad!
feel better,
but wow..you are a really good writer!
and i love how your poem flows so well.

Your rhyme worked well in this one...great job! ^_^

Wow. i love this poem. 5/5... keep it up.

much love,
mac.<3

Kay, i knew u were good, but this is absolutely mind-blowing!
I luv u, and remember that even tho we have times like these, we also have friends to help us get thru them.
I'll always be there for u Kay!

~Sophie~

Great poem, good flow, good choice of words too, clearly displays a truly painful broken heart. well done

I Love this poem sooo much!!!!
It's beautiful! I love the rhyming! It so powerful and reminded me of some things my friend was going through.

Sometimes words cannot explain what people are feeling.

This time, they could.
5/5