What hidden within my heart

by njabulo b   Jul 24, 2007


I have something hidden within my heart
It might be for you yet you can not see
It known by only me, myself and nobody else
It is so special especially for you
Cause once it comes out it will be made by you,

As it is special it needs a special one
Who will take it with care just because it care
It is fragile so easy to break
So it needs a good heart which will treat it with faith,
I've living with for such a long time
Hoping after some time I will get a good one
Today I'm still with it waiting for you to come
And if you are willing you welcome with warm hands
With a promise to free a heart in a good way,

Yet is not free since it's not sure
That what it will get is it real from the heart
And freedom is a day in which I will meet you
To come and bring happiness truly from your heart

To get it I just need one simply thing
Which I count first before anything else
'FAITHFULLY' mean all what you say and keep your promises

I wish to tell u it but I don't how to say
It too complicated, glorious and wonderful
I think I know it but I sometimes get confused
Way nice it is so hard to be explained
But let me just tell you before life get too far
What driving me inside is this thing called......LOVE

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    A fine work as this has the potential to be augmented in structure and flow, I believe. Though it didn't particularly flow well, I'd still give you my props for the effort you've exerted upon writing this.

    "Way nice it is so hard to be explained"

    ^I liked that line. It never conjured a mental image in my mind, whereas it did serve as a provocative thought. You don't have to explain it; it's (Love) unexplainable... :)

    But I think it should be "What's Hidden Within/Inside My Heart" rather than behind... it makes more sense to me... at least.

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I know what you mean 4/5 very powerful but try putting a little more transition and i posted a collab in which would be really nice if you read

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