Awww thats so sweet a lovely piece with true meaning, well done xox sam

Chavii
What a beautiful write of the pain and joy of becoming a mother.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Love Cindy

Wonderful poem... and a very nice theme... well written... but i think u could have structured it better...

Miss Chavii,

This poem held so much beauty and meaning. It's very endearing; and it gave me a better glimpse and understanding of a mother's joy the first time she held the baby in her arms. :) Thanks for sharing. I really appreciated the thoughts you've brought into play within your words. So thoughtful. So meaningful. A joy to read. :)

Take care,
Marian

The woman inside her now feels complete.

^This sums it up.....the birth of a child is the ultimate spiritual exoerience....and the ultimate love....I remember the birth of my first....never thought it was possible to love someone so much......beautiful poem.....All the best, Debbie

Chavii, beautiful work, love the the flow and use of words here. A clear and descriptive piece. Well done! Greta. xox

Nice^^

Chavii,

I love this! It's just so beautiful. You describe the joys of becoming a mother perfectly. :] Just wonderful! 5.5

"The woman inside her now feels complete."

^ && I love the way you ended the poem... it sort of sums up the entire poem within one line. Lovely job!

- Stephyy <3

How true, a woman feels complete when she gives birth to a new life.The feelings are penned beautifully.