It was really good.. Coz it's from your heart.. 'The best poems are from the heart' It flowed well.. And I can really feel your hatred in this piece. Good job.

Dang this poem is pretty deep and it kinda scares me at the same time...i can feel your emotion and everything in this poem although i do feel that the ending slipped up a lil bit...but over all 5/5

I struggle with these type of feelings very often. You and I seem to have something in common, but in a somewhat different kind of way.

I loved it,
Its what you feel and that counts!
Also since i knew what it all is about i love it even more, i know all people in the poem, and well, it certainly is some truth!!

Good job :D

Great poem
it is interesting
i went though this before also
except she wasnt cheating on with a girl:S:S
lmao
well good job

Keenan

Real deep emotions in this poem.
Very honest.
Yet it's a great piece of work.
Take care

STRONG WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean really strong! great flow tho. and great rhyme! jus great job! sry bout ur friend tho!