Wow! this poem is really good...and full of emotion..

there's only one thing that i think should be changed.....

throughout the entire poem every line rhymed with the one above it...but this part really didnt sound like it rhymed when i was reading it....

"Dead is the love we had
Dead are all the words you said"

had and said dont really rhyme...

but overall good poem..i still give you a 5/5

~michelle~

Kudo's, kudo's and more kudo's! I really liked reading this poem. you can just hear the truth as you read the words. well done!

Great job!!! My dead heart sings it's funeral song in crimson rain
With only memories of silent pain.
thats my fav part... it has alot of emotion in it... I loved it! ^_^ keep it up!!!

~*~Skye~*~

My heart sings it's funeral song in crimson rain
With only memories of silent pain.

This was my favorite part too. Suuuuch a good writer. An the "said" and "head' part was sometihng I liked about the poem. Great, great job again! 5/5
~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~ \\// rock out

A tear fell from my eye at the end of this poem it is truly an inspiration.....5

Excellent Writting! It was so emotional..I liked reading this...5/5

Amazing poem!!!!!!!!!! love it!