Terra,

This was a beautiful poem, I like the structure of it, It flowed nicely too.. Great choice of words.. =)

Her weakness is her love; she is as pure as a dove
And the blue in her eyes, turned like the black misty skies
^^ I really adore those two lines..

Keep up the fantastic work!

Great piece. The inter rhymes really caught my attention. This is a great style and I loved the word choice. You kept it beautiful.

tc
Fsams