Miss Cindy,

This work was different from the earlier ones. Tersely expressed, but absoBLOODYlootely brilliant. Strange, but I found myself awfully delighted with its morbid imagery. A stunning success, as always! All the best and take care.

Love,
Debbie

That is very dark indeed hells gate opening, the fire that can eat you up inside its very vivid, well done cindy this is a great piece xox sam

Not like your other writes but all the same very well done.A thought provoking write.

This is definitely worth a five! 5/5

Exceptional...I hope it reaches someone in need

Very different from your usual poetry Cindy....short, dark, and effective.....nicely done....in few words.....

Wow...writing ultimate poetry seems to be in blood. very good imagination and great usage of words too. The flow is outstanding as i always find in ur poems.

keep writing sweetie (but not dark ones)

all the best and take care

My dear friend, once again you amaze me within your penned here.... simply yet great choice of words..... Well done!

Keep them coming my friend, take care.....Bert.

Nice work! 5/5

Good one! i like it! i'll give you 5/5 too!

Well..you owe me a happy one, and you put this up?? lmao, great work, i love it

"Screaming names
Following commands
Stumbling forward
Evils demand"

those lines are immaculate..great work cindy!!

Very intense

Wow, Cindy.
I loved it! It wasn't your usual style but you did this so well.
love Tara-Kay
x

Nice..pls read my poems too

I love it, brilliant.

I LOVE IT!!!!

Wow i like this one

You're great^^

Omg i bet you worked hard on this its so nice=D

Nice write. very dark. great word usage.