Ohh this poem is really cute i love it and can so relate to it. Keep up the good work.

Good job

Great write

This is good. and i can so relate to it. great job =]

You could write this piece better. Atmosphere of this poem could be much stronger and wording isn't great. Interesting topic but it isn't very original. 4/5 (sorry that is just my opinion but your other poems are better)