"Trees bark and otters dream"
HAHAHA trees bark... oh man.

This comment really will suck. I liked the imagery, I liked the animals and wild things in the dark. I thought the kid was spooky.

"Noise stops and frolickers mild"
I thought the use of mild was weird, but acceptable. I mean, I totally understood what you were saying...so yeah.

It was great. I enjoyed it. There was sort of an erie feeling I got from the mid section of it. It was incredible. A great piece of work. 5/5 keep working

Wow this is awsum!! i love it. soo creepy and well descirbed GREAT WORK!1 5/5
much love .xx