Okay, so I am not into haiku's but yours actually makes sence....if that makes any sence...^_^

To be honest...this wasa a bit too straightforward to be a haiku. And, as someone once told me about one of mine - this can't be considered a haiku due to the fact that it's not actually about nature.

Good effort, though.

No matter how short this was, it was beautiful. it really is impossible to stare at something so beautiful, and not think of love. it truely makes you wonder and wish and fall.
as does this haiku.

5/5

What those insults say is garbage. This was awsoeme . I loved it. You got haiku talent...

Sincerly,
Mello

Woooooooooooo.
short poems are the best ones, im too easily distracted to read a long one.
yours make sense, usually haikus are crap.
haha.
good job.
5/5

Like it....it is cute and fluffy