by Stephanie Naylor Jul 26, 2007
category :
Special events /
christmas
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It was just Christmas eve |
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I wish I could of wrote like that when i was in 6th grade lol, very nice. 5/5 always. |
by Debbie
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The merriment and innocence brought forth by the young character was charming. The pitch was jovially pleasing and the emotion raw and well conveyed. This was a joy to read. I truly enjoyed this piece, Stephanie. |
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Excellent poem. 5/5 all the way and no flaws in this piece |
by Fsams
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OMG 6th grade?? Wow I loved this piece. It really shows your versatility and ability to write poems. The rhymes are beautiful with nice vocab used. The rhythm is there in this piece. 5/5 all the way |
by Goran Rahim
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Wow, even in your 6th grade you were an amazing writer. |