Comments : Inching

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    This is a good sad poem....it would work better if you put them into stanzas like a poem...then it would be perfect but all in all you hv written an emotive and deep piece!!

    keep up the good work
    tk care
    bree

  • 16 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by SweatHeart

    Haha. now u found me ive found you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jake

    Very strong poem :) it has great detail! gj :P