Aww, that's cute! lol how funny!

Wow.. haha. Yeah. That made me laugh. =D This is a 4/5 for me, just because of grammar mistakes and parts where the flow was off just a smidge. This is super great for a first poem! Good job, and keep writing.
-Parker

I feel exactly the same way as he does ^

This is so cute! it made me laugh well done few grammer mistakes but it was god

Hahaha very cute who doesnt like dr. seuss?
but yea umm nice rhythm
woo

Yeah, this was cute.
It had a message inside, and was very catchy.
well done
love Tara-Kay
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Hah cute! I love Dr. Seuss he's amazing isn't he. I think a lot of little kids would love and learn from this story nice work
5/5

And you are a Dr. Seuss expert. ^_^ I loved it. I usually don't like funny poems that much but I enjoyed this one. I just pictured it in my head. :) I gave it a five. Yay! ---->5

Dr seuss is da BOMB lol... u did really well with this poem, your rhyme scheme/flow was extremelely well kept and the story fit it well because of it's child-like morale. lol.. i know this will sound wierd but my favorite part is how you used a lime.. I would've never thought a lime.. it's such a unique fruit to use in poetry... like.. most would have said like tomato or something... I love it!

Aww what a perfect first poem i really love it...and i think children would to. Great lesson though i think some adults would do well to learn it too ^-*

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Aww haha that's cute!
5/5 -Liz

Ha nice its a good kids poem!!! keep it up!

I'm not a big fan of dr seuss , but this was a great piece. i loved the way it all came together and sounded so good. wonderful job. 5/5

nikki