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perfect the way it is
5/5

JUST ANOTHER GREAT PIECE OF YOU RWORK THIS ONE IS ON MY FAVS RIGHT AWAY. IT'S JUST.. ABSOLUTELY INDESCRIBABLE!!!!!KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL JOB, AND PLEASE, NEVER STOP!

I loved it. there were some very strong emotions in that poem and i think thats what made it great. it kinda made me want to cry it was so good.

i picture you up above
sitting on a cloud
if only you could be here
i hope Ive made you proud

that was my fav. part 5/5

"i picture you up above
sitting on a cloud
if only you could be here
i hope Ive made you proud"

This was my fav. part too...It really spoke to me.
Loved this poem, loved the emotion, and the flow was perfect for me! Good job!

How sweet!! i love how ur express ur feelings.. the structures and the whole concepts are totally great! and i think it written very well.. the whole stanza well done great and powerful 5/

Ill miss you everyday
and miss you every night
for my dearest father
you are my only light

This is very great stanza to ending the poem. This is very deep and sentimental. What else can I say!!! You deserve 5/5!!!

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It made me want to cry, you've done awonderful job with this poem - amazing emotion and flow. (:

I'm sorry for your loss, but I'm also glad you feel this way instead of all gah about it. (:
I'm sure he's proud of you. (:

memory's*
capitalizethe I's. (:

5/5

This is so beautiful!! my best friend lost his father when he was little, and i know he would weep if he read this!!

That's so sweet... Fathers are the bests... 5/5

I love this poem. u put you emotions into it well. i loved the ending. excellent job.

This poem has a very strong emotion behind it and it's very sweet of you to write a poem about your father

Although The Title?

Yeah, kinda confused about that how do you get "Remember Us" From this poem

Who's "US"?

Sorry if i'm coming off harshly it's just i'm a little confused right now

If I had to pick a title for this poem I would probably choose the title "TOY" [Thinking Of You]

You don't have to change it, It was just a thought But you really did great work! 5/5