Everything was great, but the last stanza kinda bugged me. you changed your rhyme scheme, or didn't use it at all because courage and words don't rhyme. Oh well, the rest was great. I hope someday you will find the courage to tell this girl how you feel (whoever it is.)

Good poem.

WonderfuL writinG.... keeP uP youR writingS..... mE lovE youR stylE oF writinG verY mucH...

Nice poem .. i like it ... ur a good writer

so keep it up

I liked the flow of the poem and it had an ok ryming scheme but I agree with Vodka..the last stanza did throw the ryming off a little but all in all it was a good poem.5/5 still

<3Amber

The flow was great . the rhyming scheme was a little off but apart from that. nothing was wrong with it. 5/5

I really like this poem. It has a lot of emotion in it and it kind of reminds me of those old movies when the woman is scared to say they love him and then she says it when he gets ready to leave. but it is an amazing poem. i love it.

I cant imagine how work it all out. You are able to make a constant flow while rhyming. I really adored it. 5/5

Wow..
beautiful write
keep it up!
-Lisa