This was well done keep it up. i think u can make even greater poems! 5/5

Nice imagination

You describe stuff so well i love the part...

it consumes her inner being,
and chills her soul,
she doesn't know
but the fog is already killing her,
already dissolving her sweet soul,
love is a fog, life is a forest

such good use of words loveeee it!! xx

Oh my so very good and sweet
i absoultely love the description
i can soo imagine it 5/5

Interesting poem =] It's nice the way you describe things, and this ending is very powerful: love is a fog, life is a forest.
It's beautiful! =]
5/5 again for you hun.

xxx <3
p.s
I really enjoy everyone of your poems o.O!

Wow.
A great way to compare. xD
amazing poem, dear.
Keep it uppp.

Wow beautiful the words were just...mesmerizing. yes i think thats the perfect word for it...5/5

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This poem reminds me of you and i as we first meet and our first time together at my house this is monderfully writen and descriptive i love it <3 your baby forever Travis

This was really cute. Although no flow, it was still a great peice!
5/5
((Amber))

Gosh, Angela, you have a way with words. :) It's a huge metaphorical piece.

"so bliss is the girl
as she breaths in the fog,
it consumes her inner being,
and chills her soul,"

If love is the fog, how wonderful! You write so elegantly for such a short piece. It's so sweet and delightful to read. Honest. I hope you keep on writing.

Take care,
Marian

Great poem.
It's so true..
Loved it .
5/5
Keep up the great job.

You write like me in some ways. A wonderful poem. I enjoy your writing.

Wonderful metaphor!! It's absolutely beautiful. You have a great talent when it come to word usage. It was a very pleasant poem to read. 5/5

marcella