Angels cry
After you and I.

Or you could try ending it with

angles cry
when there is no more you an i

Wow this is very good.. and its true
<3
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Wow...that is so sad and sweet! brilliant!

Wow this is really good keep up the good work 5/5
:)

Wow..deep poem but very goood. =]] 5/5
amanda.

I like what felix said. but this poem is still very beautiful! Nice work.

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