Aww... How sweet.. lol... Good Job!! =]

It is sweet. =P Keep it up!
-Vanilla Pain

Feels like i just walk right out of heaven

If my life were a book you would be tha best chapter
thos to lines stood out to me a lot.
this was very well written, it flowed very well and was very creativ and sweet.

Aww thats sweet
i loved the "i love you" repetition part
it was nice
we should all feel a love like this
amazing poem!

This was a really nice poem.
expressed great feelings of love. i think your 'superwoman' is proud to have you. lol =]
great job!
i enjoyed reading this..

--Viola

AWW DiSZ iSZ SO KUTE UR 'SUPERWOMAN' MUST B HAPPY 2 HAVE U LOLSZ STAY UP
MUHASZZZZZZZ
-iiM SUCH A BEAUTiiFUL DiiASTER

Awwww hehe thaz so cute!hehe

I am just LOVIN your poems!!! you are a GREAT writer hun!! keep up the good work! <3

I cant wait to find my true love and feel like you do wow this is deep love it

Much improved. :) I gave you a 3 on this one. The rhyming is a little off but for most people it is. It's much easier to read now that not everything is in capital letters. I woul prefer to see all of the words like i and i'm capitalized but it's a start. The message was pretty good as well. I really love that super women line. I recomend reading the poems of the contest winners. Experimenting with different poem subjects is good too. Keep on writting and trying to improve.

5/5 very good

THE END WAS SOOO SWEET..AW
AND SUPERWOMAN WAS THE SONG!!

How sweet...i like it 5/5

I like this one! 5/5 Good Job!