Wow. It made me want to cry.
I really, really, really like it, dear.
Like, it's one of your VERY BEST.
I'm suprised, I absolutely loved it.

Keep it up dear, this was seriously amazing.
xDD

Well now this definitly tops the last one I read of yours. I enjoyed it alot. The word choice was simple yet effective holding such strong emotions. The flow was quite good.
Well done on this amazing piece. ~mel

Great poem...i really liked it..and i liked the fact that it was true...i usually dont like poems that dont rhyme but this one just caught my attention.good job! 5/5

Very good imagery
I felt as though I was standing beside you throughout the whole poem

In these simple pleasures
and in the haven of my mind
have I managed to escape
a past and still a present
that tears cannot describe.

^^ that was definitly my favorite part
nice work
5/5
kaila

Wow that is amazing truly masterful work your words flow together smoothly and it has a deep perspective keep up the great work

I liked how you said "your old life".
worded very well.
the line about winters end and slush made me go back to a time like that of mine.
the flow was nice.
<333

Amazing, filled with deep sadness and overflowing with talent. Excellent job, keep it up.