This was a very beautiful piece. I loved the words you used: jocosity, aridity... :) very stunningly put. 5/5 |
Very good poem... |
I loved it.. especially the last line.. when silence falls apart.. really nice!! |
by sneha
Quietly observing the moment when silence falls apart |
by Dark Shadows
Talking to myself and my soul talks to me |
by mossgirl19
Beautiful and I can relate with this so well. |