Well as always your poem amazes me. I really like the structure of the poem.. I love your choice of words.. ^_^

O, solemn and infinite Universe,
^^ My favorite line.. ^_^

btw I read this poem twice coz it was really beautiful.

The easier a format is, the harder it is to make the poem sound poetic. But you pulled it off. You used great descriptions and limited the usage of "I" Nice job

Very powerful piece! you pulled it off perfect with that kind of form. Imagery was also amazing. And the ending.. I havent understood how powerful word is rage till now!
Flawless
5/5