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that poem was awesome keep it up

wow, you are so brilliant when you write, i read ur profile, n' you sound like a great guy, a very different kinda guy...I think ur amazing, and I an't wait to read more of your poems...See NOW THAT WAS A POEm..it wasn't a story that rhymed, it was a poem...and I love that, YOu do'nt see that much anymore...Great job