I Love You

by Vanessa   Jul 28, 2007


Everyone might wonder why,
I fell in love with you
and my answer always is
because I know his love is true.

Ever since your eyes looked at me
something changed the way I feel
I never imagined that your words
little by little began my heart to steal.

I will always be here for you
and I will never turn my back
if there's anything you need
don't feel embarrassed, Babe just ask.

I will try to make you happy
and please you in every way
I will never try to harm you
so by my side you'll always stay.

We will be together for ever
till the end of the world
and you know what Baby?
I will always be your girl!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    That was quite the statement you made there! Very clear, as well as strong. However, some parts of the poem seemed a little typical, for example the last stanza. A lot of love poems use those exact words, only slightly changed.

    "I never imagined that your words
    little by little began my heart to steal."

    ^I also thought those^ lines were a little awkward, they cause the reader to stop and think about exactly what you are trying to say. Just my opinion, but they seem a little confusing.

    Great effort on your poem, it seems you have found a good inspiration for your writing, and I'm sure you will be able to come up with many great poems.

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