Yeah I know what you mean. I thihk that the catigory is about right. Good jobb.

Excellent poem very well wrote and such feeling, it really does paint a vivid picture, keep up the good work :D

Ok..first uvall.. tht was damn sad.. and 0_0.. wtf it was SO DAMN RELATABLE ..a brilliantly penned piece of work.. i loved it.. keep it up

looking forward to more of your work

~Wake~

Ok...wow, sad...but i can relate...i did A LOT of self harm and i tried committing suicide about 5 months ago...this brings back sum memories...BEAUTIFULLY written...keep up the great work.
cant wait so see sum more of your work!

BabyGurl
Jenna

ps. thanks for your comment!!

Beautiful poem u should check out some of mine.their kinda similar.this 1 really spoke to me. im kinda jelous.5/5 good job

cory

I love it

5/5

Yeh i think this is in the right category
this was so deep and moving, honestly it actually sent a shiver down my spine as i read because it was so powerfully written and so easy to relate to. this is just wow, even though it is so sad, it is so very good
5/5 xx