Great poem.i really loved it.keep on writing.

~Christina~

Aww how sweet and sad, but another great poem! Some people are blind and just need a big wakeup call. Great poem!! You and I must be feeling the same thing.

It fows well. u sound angry. keep writing:)

"In your greatness,
So blind were you,
You did not see,
My love was true."

Very poignant ending, it sums up the hurt and pain perfectly, yet also holds a tint of defience and pride
Well done
5/5
*gem*

Great flow. This is definitely a good one!
5/5 as always.
Comment some of my newest.
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I like this one. i enjoy your poems. always keep writing. :)

The poets pen bleeds the words of love and the pain that moved your heart to write this piece is very truly felt I'm sure. Keep up the good writes and may your path bring smooth times when you can shed your wings and rest turmoil free. peace