That is such a beautiful heartwarming poem.A real inspiring write,loved it.

Take care
chavii.

What a peaceful calm poem. You did an awesome job.

Seep into the Self
Peace within and without
A mind free of thoughts
With faith in my heart.

Love these lines. One has to look deep within to find these things.
Great!
Take Care Cindy

Wow....Alka, this is very beautiful. This poem is very well written and so emotional in so many words. The imagery of it was magnificent and I loved the metaphors that you used. I think that this is one of your best poems and I am adding it to my favorites list.
I loved the poem as a whole, but these are my favorite stanzas:

The vast ocean in front
The tides rumbling
Followed by quietude
Reminds of mellowness

The sun glaring high
The warmth,giving energy
To overcome our struggles
Holding high in self-esteem

The evening sky-a hue of colours
Mind blowing cool breeze
The birds flying back to their nest
Resting in peace

And this one also:

Seep into the Self
Peace within and without
A mind free of thoughts
With faith in my heart

I just love those four. You are wonderful at what you do. Please keep up the great work, because I am back and ready to do some reading and commenting. lol

Love
Letty

How amazing ur desecription

Faith n belief
truth of life thats what the poem said
5/5

dont forget to check my poems . please do r.r.c

poem 1 reason
poem 2 deaf dumb blind

Well written...specialy the last three stanzas..guiding ones...carry on wid these brilliant types!!

You are a great Nature watcher. You are yet away from the 'sordid boon'. I specially liked:

Wonder will that day come
From these gifts of nature
So much to learn
Be able to reach my final goal

An inner urge to be one with Nature and learn from it as Wordsworth says:

This our life exempt from public haunt,
Finds tongues in trees , books in the running brooks,
Sermons in stones and good in everything.

Beautiful! I love this; it's so pretty!5/5!

Beautiful, 5/5. Em x

Nature has a lot to teach us and when we give ourselves to her and become one there is inner peace and beauty to smile about. Liked the flow of this write and its serenity...lovely!