I liked it, though am not too sure i got what you were saying, it fowed well throughout and was a good read.
Love Tara-Kay
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This was a good poem but i dont think i understode the entire concept of the poem but i love how you made me think! The flow was great all the way through and the words rhymed well...good pen.

It was a great poem.. It flowed well, good job! I like the way you rhymed some lines, keep it up.

so wrong was she, her scorn as dark as her hair
^^ Good Simile.

Just a suggestion to capitalize all the I's.

Keep writing! =)

And last change the title to..

Wounded Spirit =) I think it look better that way.

I say get rid of that thorn in ur side.

your favorite friend
Kate

Wow! powerful and deep! 5/5

Aww i think this is very cute aww and i like the dedication