Hey..that was really .. deep and .. it kinda hurts to read it... great job.. made me feel.. great going.

~Wake~

Really strong i loved the"Why do you have to hurt me?
It lasts forever
Because I bruise easily"
part very strong.5/5 u rock

This is a very sad poem, but it is a masterpiece. You're a very talented writer.
5/5

Very sad poem. i can relate. but keep it up your a wonderful writer =]