Its good i like it 5/5

Loved it really good hope u write more soon :)
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Excellent job, wonderfully written and the wording was great, little long but very good,you did a marvelous job on this piece please keep it up, your friend Tracy d ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,5/5

Excellent job, wonderfully written and the wording was great, little long but very good,you did a marvelous job on this piece please keep it up, your friend Tracy d ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,5/5

Hey that was a really good poem im not tyrna get personal but did that happen to you?

This was beautiful 5/5

I loved this poem...it wonderful when u find the one who proves that he is different 5/5

I really like this one. its written wonderfully well. not rusty at all. perfect. keep up the good work.

This is truely a beautiful piece you have penned. The imagery is great.
Take Care Cindy

This is so wonderful.... it's not "rusty" at all. i put new stuff up- comment sumof mine please?

I LOVED it...it was beautiful. Your last stanza was the only one that didn't seem as outstanding as the rest, but as a whole, the poem was great!
I enjoyed how I could picture this in my mind. Great job!
Charisma*