My Heart Was Breaking

by Blaketooken   Jul 30, 2007


Sitting in the shower using all of my tears
I feel like i'm using windshield wipers but things are still not clear
I don't feel anything for you anymore
But I still want to be with you...
You were what I prayed for
It feels like our story is ending
Like we're in a play and we're just pretending
I love you so much that when i think of us breaking up I just want to cry
The pain I would feel..oh the pain...I know I would die
I knew I had to say something...things had to change
There used to be so much sun and I'm tired of the rain
So we talked and worked things out
From there on I had no amount of doubt
I told you how I felt
You knew what I meant so you loved on me and I felt like I was about to melt
Now things are back to the way they used to be
But none of that wouldn't of happened if I didn't tell him that my heart was breaking

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  • 16 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    This is a good beginning poem. It has the start to become more than it is. What I want you to do is put as much detail possible, use every emotion that comes to you, if it is sad, expand on it and make it deep. You have the potential to write great things.

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