Comments : You Made Me Fall

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    So much meaning and feeling in this one. Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    That is a sad story...but one heck of an ending! Its always great to get up after hard trials.....Tough going through things and having people you thought you loved watch you go threw them with no help.....but your a good person to be telling your story of how you really CAN get yourself through negative situations!.....Great poem Cathy! Good meaning!
    Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a great poem.. Very emotional. It flowed nicely, good job! I think to improve this you should try to use punctuations =)

    Keep up the good work.