Great stuff as usual James, i love your writing style! xox Greta

Yay, a full version! The second part is really great, nice vocabulary use. I like the subtle rhyming because it's not over done. Greta xox

Great poem.
Good rhyming and flow
You used the right words.

" before the day i first met you i was a ship lost out at sea,
there was just this empty world and a lonely feeling me, "

My favourite lines.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Well done
Take care

Wow...so whos this wonder woman u tlk bout who seems to b out of reach aye!!...all i can say is gr8 ryt buddy!!
keep it up!

tk care

That was fabulous! 5/5

'before the day i first met you i was a ship lost out at sea,
there was just this empty world and a lonely feeling me,'
^favorite lines. They are so strong.
It's so amazing to me because that's how I felt to before I found the one that I fell in love with.
Loved reading this!
5/5
*Brittney

That's well good babe!
love all you writin!
ly
<3