Wow this poem was umm how do you say GREAT when i was reading it i was just trying to picture what you must of been thinking about when you wrote it...it was a great poem and great point WOW!

Noelle

Excellent poem , well written and wording was great , you did a wonderful job on this piece , be proud and know your good at what you do and expressing yourself, a pleasure to read , keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Well writen keep it up nicely done

Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions..

Nazeer

Very deep and nicely written, I like it from the beginning to the end. I just don't like the repetition of the word "now" in the fourth stanza because that ruins the flow of the piece in that part. All in all, great job!

VERy qOOD. PLEASE READ & COMMENT MiNE. THANKSz 5/5

Rele nice poem great job!