Wow....... THat one is really sad , I like how it shows how intolerant people in general are of other people's feelings, If evveryone could read this , I think it would make the world a bit more tolerant. Bravo, Bravo

I was reading this again and in the line You say he has to loving brothers , I think you mean two so you might want to fix that, But it was still excellent

Its sad ID BE HIS FRIEND DANG IT it was an amazing write it brings out emotion off the paper and into your very heart you feel sympathy for him poor guy kudos on a great poem

Jimmy can not be repaired
So everybody stared
Jimmy was retarded
So from everyone else he was parted

the flow in this part was a little off you might want to fix that but otherwise good poem it reminde me of a bood called Flower for Algernon 5/5 good job fix some misstakes