Promis

by elliianna   Jul 31, 2007


Promise me your heart every day...
Promise me your love every day and...
Promise me your heart every day of the rest of our lives....
Promise me your love every day of the rest of our lives....
And ill give all the same

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  • 16 years ago

    by Behind Blue Eyes

    I dont know what to say about this poe... it feel like it's missing something. you might want to add more onto it... it's hard to get a poem to sound right when it's repetitive AND short like yours is...

    but good start!

    <3

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