Wow...that was really good and actually kinda hurt =P Very good meaning in it and one that I think most of us need to realize =P 5/5 And a little to truthful =P
Rhea

Dang dude this is really good it was really good but scary at the same time keep up the good work 5/5

I like it. It just seems real but it could be

That was an amazing poem.. wow im speechless, honestly. that was so well done.. and the turn in the poem that happened was kind of shocking to me.. i didnt really expect it, but i liked the twist of you ending up waking up.. great job! keep it up!!
5/5

Great poem..i really like it