I really like this poem, it flows well, and i like the cotrast between reality and stories, something which i too wish wasnt so strong, well done! xx

It was a great poem.. Flow was smooth, I like the theme in the poem, well done

And in some fairytale
Is a picture of me and you.
I hate the lies portrayed...
'Cause that won't come true.
^^ My favorite stanza.

Keep up the good work.

This is really cute.
Your flow was flawless, and your overall messgae was beautiful
great job!
5/5
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That was pretty good! i liked it a lot