I thought this was a very interesting piece...

You used apprx. equal stanza length, yet they didn't seem to rhyme, which is, well... Awesome, in my book.

I like your voice. I'll check more of your work.
Oh, 5/5.

Definately not my type of style. But you made it work. Nicely done.

Comment/vote back. :)

I can relate to this peice. i loved how you worded it though. your style was interesting to read
great job
<3 emma

Wow, the emotion in this peice was AMAZING.
Your message for me, was kinda misunderstood.
But it was a beautiful peice.
Great job!
5/5

XxAmberxX

This is a great piece. The deepness of each words, it was perfect. It was modest in a good way that it fits the poem. Well written.

I like this poem it is great

Wow. amazing. awesome job. deep, powerful, and emotional. loved it.

--aprils conspiracy