Omg i love it great poem
it wasflawless the meaning behind it and everything
i ought to read some of your other poems great great job on this poem 5/5
thank you for writing it =]

Such a sad poem though you wrote it beautifully. Nice word choice here. The flow was flawless. I think it ended perfectly as well. 5/5

marcella

I love it. It is great work. I can feel your emotions off every word. 5/5

Laura, I kno this is getting old, but you're my friend, and damn it! I dont want you to feel like this nobody should, if you cannot on anyone else, rely on me!

"A tear for every word
That is left unsaid
They fall from my face
As I sit on my bed"
even if i said she wouldnt hear wara i was trying to tell so i chose to take he fastest way so i cant remember another fake tale i smiled then i turned to other side of my self weird shame sickness he tittle of past

This poem is great keep up the good work!
5/5
:):):)

Wow great poem keep it up

Every word flowed so well into the next, every line held so much emotion, every stanza held sadness that brought tears to ym eyes. you really did an axcellent job with this, my friend.
love Tara-Kay
x

That was a beaautiful poem! the flow was amazing i loved it! def 5/5 keep it up!

Thats so nice and i love it so much

•·.·´¯`·. christal•·.·´¯`·.

Aww it was a cute poem hunn :)
Very beautiful, 5/5
Love the ending and the overall theme and story :D

This poem is amazing. it kept me intrested as i read, and i felt like i could really relate to it. so great job. ~schylar~

Really good.

Beautifully written....amazing...and its so true.. for me ...wow its just great. definately 5/5

Omg omg omg omg that was deep i loved it all i mean wow im speechless......

Hey i loe this poem is so kuteee i love the way you write and thats so one of my favorite poems :P

I love this one!
It almost made me cry!
Girl you got it goin' on!!

:D

Luv ya girl!
-Lauran

Oh girl.... this is sad.... i know how you feel though, or im assuming by this poem how you feel. it was a great poem! truly! every word and every line just flowed so well... i really can tell you express your feelings well through poetry.. great job! =) keep it up
5/5

Hey great job, keep up the great work.

SaO

Good job i like it alot
it has alot of emotion in it
but fears are ment to be broken you should never be afraid to live no matter what.