Comments : Want

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    This poem really reflects how you feel, but in the first stanza, it reflects it a little too much because of the exclamation marks.. ;] maybe just less of those would do good.
    Well, overal a 5/5 for you ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    lots of emotion in it
    tis a great poem:D:D

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Really powerful poem,
    Well written,
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Nice. i liked it. great flow and rythm. good word choice. 5/5

  • This poem kind of confused me. I don't know what it was, I just can't put my finger on it. 4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Very effective and good choice in words! Good choice of title as well! <3