Comments : I want

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    My pleasure to read this Beautiful penned...writing within beautiful emotions. from the lover to the lover, yet longing someone... so sad, i hope things are good with you..take care, Bert.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful poem. I hope someday your dream comes true.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by ABake

    This was adorable.
    Your emotion is really strong.
    Your flow was kinda. iffy, but still a beautiful poem.

    For too long this has been my dream ,
    and I am aching for it come true.

    These lines, were a perfect ending for this peice. Beautiful!
    Great job!


  • 13 years ago

    by MizzCici

    WOW WOW WOW all i can say is i really really feel u on diz poem, i feel da same i love it keep da good work up........

  • 13 years ago

    by sonia

    Omg this was an amazing poem, and i would be honored if you would come take a look at my poem and give me feedback. i would greatly appreciate it from you♥

  • 13 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    Wow. I realy enjoyed this poem. I have a few you might like.