What a beautifully written piece ,moved me from start to finish ,but then thats no surprise as all your writes touch me in some way or another.This was the verse that touched me the most.....
But my love for her is so deep
it even robs me of sleep
I am in so much emotional pain
maybe a balde deep into a vein.
It touched me because I love someone so much ,I can't sleep and I have to feel so musch hurt cos I can 't be with him that yes at times I have wondered if it would just be easier to take the easy way out.But I do not have the strength to take such drastic action for I have my kids and they they are my reason for waking up each day.
A very emotional piece.... love hurts, but thats the price we pay when we fall hard for someone. But then we pick up the pieces and move on with our lives, as will you.... peace, love and happiness to you my dear friend.
Diz rite here is my top favorite i love it, you put alot of feelin and emotions to it,u must have really loved her, dat was very very beautiful,i love it, it almost made me cry.....lol
really love it,keep da good work up...........