Comments : Remain miles apart.

  • 13 years ago

    by June

    What a beautifully written piece ,moved me from start to finish ,but then thats no surprise as all your writes touch me in some way or another.This was the verse that touched me the most.....

    But my love for her is so deep
    it even robs me of sleep
    I am in so much emotional pain
    maybe a balde deep into a vein.

    It touched me because I love someone so much ,I can't sleep and I have to feel so musch hurt cos I can 't be with him that yes at times I have wondered if it would just be easier to take the easy way out.But I do not have the strength to take such drastic action for I have my kids and they they are my reason for waking up each day.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    What a gut wrenching piece you have penned. The pain, dispair, and heartache cry from everyword.

    Time to allow myself to grow old
    forever staying alone and cold
    I've said my piece, I'll say no more
    I'll just curl up here and die on the floor.

    I have felt this so many times....Yet the good Lord always shows me reasons to go on. Wonderful poem full of intense and deep feelings. You are always in my thoughts and prayers.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Wake

    Hmm.. Damn Sad.. but Damn Lovely .. brilliant piece of work..
    Loved IT!!

    ~Wake~

  • 13 years ago

    by Shay

    This poem is wondeful !

  • 13 years ago

    by Mr M

    I just love the way you write. You see so clearly within yourself. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Angie

    A very emotional piece.... love hurts, but thats the price we pay when we fall hard for someone. But then we pick up the pieces and move on with our lives, as will you.... peace, love and happiness to you my dear friend.

  • 13 years ago

    by ♥shyann♥

    Excellent!! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by MizzCici

    Diz rite here is my top favorite i love it, you put alot of feelin and emotions to it,u must have really loved her, dat was very very beautiful,i love it, it almost made me cry.....lol
    really love it,keep da good work up...........

  • 13 years ago

    by schylar

    This poem is absolutly amazing. i loved it. i can honestly relate to it. so great work!!! ~schylar~

  • 13 years ago

    by lumbete

    This awesome an in the same situation your poem hit home

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    I loved it, can fele the emotions pouring off if it

  • 13 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Very great writting... keep it up
    50/50

  • 13 years ago

    by jose

    Good work i wonder how you did it great creativity keep it up,so touching and it touched me indeed

  • 10 years ago

    by IML

    That all was so well written together.

  • 9 years ago

    by nafeel

    This poem is so deep that it brought back memories for me :D

  • 8 years ago

    by Max

    Gr8 piece btw just read the 11th time haha =P
    5/5 i already gave that vote