Nice writing i just got confused alot :S but a thought provoking piece

Lol, thought provoking, another term for
"what the hell is she on about?"
Heheh, Oh well!

Wow this is very true and the words fit together perfectly
great job 5/5

laura

Wow great poem describing aspects of time. The flow is beautiful plus the content is great, the way words strung ech other makes it standout. 5/5 all the way

Tc
fsams

I agree -- very thought provoking! :) I love the emotion and word choice in this marvelous piece! Great work! 5/5

Wonderful poem....the flow was perfect ...even though nonrhyming poems dont really interest me this one is good. i like it.

"Determined souls fuse together doubt,
Pretentious hate among your love,
Cloudy daze fog your memory,
Time elapses into nothing."

^^these are my favorite lines..

and i love your choice of words. 5/5

Wow this was a great poem you have done a really great job that shows u are really talented.
keep it up

Wow. Beautifully done. You have used some very nice words, well done.

To be honest ive been trying to write a poem bout time for ages but i cant seem to get a good flow
you on the other hand seemed to have handled it very well
5/5 again

Great piece of work!!

God bless u

Wow, this is just amazing, you should be proud on your self, topic is excellent and you created truly impressing and breathtaking atmosphere in it. I love every line, it is just so impressing.

-Time ticking away this hour,
Moon swept shadows along my face.
Solemn sorrys put to no end,
With a frantic dream to trace the time,
Time of no end,
Time of all.
Calling those who will not answer-

^This seven lines left me without the words, they are totally incredible.

I've always loved poems about time, and you managed to write a very good one about it. I love the use you put it in.

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